5 thoughts on “DANI-GIRL at Flash Fiction Online NOW

  1. K.C. Ball

    Just read Dani-Girl; you owe me a box of Klennex. Seriously, it a fantastic story and it left me wanting more. Is it the opening gambit in a novel? If it isn’t, then it should be; you have a winning character there.BTW: congratulations on making Flash Fiction Online; you are in good company.

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  2. Shameless

    It’s excellent, Gay. I like how you moved things around at the end.I also like the changes you made toward the end, you omitted some stuff and it still makes perfect sense.Very nicely done. I really like it.

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