5 thoughts on “DANI-GIRL at Flash Fiction Online NOW”

1. K.C. Ball October 2, 2008 at 8:48 pm

   Just read Dani-Girl; you owe me a box of Klennex. Seriously, it a fantastic story and it left me wanting more. Is it the opening gambit in a novel? If it isn’t, then it should be; you have a winning character there.BTW: congratulations on making Flash Fiction Online; you are in good company.

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2. Shameless October 2, 2008 at 9:05 pm

   It’s excellent, Gay. I like how you moved things around at the end.I also like the changes you made toward the end, you omitted some stuff and it still makes perfect sense.Very nicely done. I really like it.

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3. Gay Degani October 2, 2008 at 10:08 pm

   Thanks you guys. I really appreciate it. I was a little panicked the other day when I reread it.

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4. Erin October 3, 2008 at 1:43 pm

   Gay, I loved this one. Very well done. The use of the rules framing the story was excellent. Congrats!

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5. sylvia October 5, 2008 at 4:48 pm

   It’s very powerful. Well done.

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